I think the colors you used in the first one went perfectly with the quote you used and the way you typed out brotherswas really nice. I absolutely love the colors in the second poster and I think the way you made to and a look was really interesting. I think out of them all the last is my favorite. I really like the quote and I like the way you curved the word interpretations.
i like the positioning of words in the first one because it adds a lot to the meaning brought the focus out more love the contrast of colors in the second one, and the different sizes of words made it more interesting the last one is good because the quote is so interesting and i liked how you curved "interpretations" to give it some extra boldness/meaning
I like how out of all three of your quotes, I'd only heard one before. So that's cool that you don't just like the same quotes as everyone else. I think that the second one is my favorite, because the quote is so true, I like the colors, and the font and size of the font you used give emphasis to the right words.
1 - the colors blend together. if you were going to draw attention to a certain word, i would put it in white. so if you were going to draw the attention to "Brothers" then yeah... white colored font. 2 - the zig-zag pattern is cool. maybe you could make the words "Fists" and "Knife" a different color... 3 - i like the way the word "Interpretations" curves upward. some variations of different colors, or font styles, would've made the poster a little better
1st poster: i really liked the quote and the font, but i think that it's all too dark. the dark letters against a dark background. it makes it harder to read. 2nd poster: i think the colors in this poster are really cool. i also like that the words are all different sizes and that they're not all aligned. nothing bad to say about this one. 3rd poster: again, i really like the colors. i think it's cool that you actually put on there the name of the person who said that. i think i would have made the background a brighter purple. this one, too, seems a little dark.
For the first one: "All wars are civil wars..." I really, really like the thought, and I also really like the way you expressed it. I liked how you did most of the quote all in one size in like a column, and then did "brothers" in a larger size and on a a diagonal path. I think that really had a great impact on the effect of the quote. I can't really think of any way to improve it except maybe having only 3 dots instead of 5, (after "all men are").
For the second one: "Don't bring fists to a knife fight," The first thing I thought of after seeing it was, "Well, if you don't then what do you intend to hold your knife with?" but anyway that is off subject. I thought that the yellow on purple coloring really looked good and I also liked the different sizes of the lines, ("knife" being just a little bigger than everything else, "don't" and "fists" following at just a little smaller, and "bring", "to", and "a" being comparatively rather small.) I think that emphasizing the keywords like that really had a great positive impact on the overall effect of the quote. The only recommendation I have for you on that one is that it's possible that certain other colors might go better with the quote and its message.
Finally, for you third quote: "There are no facts..."-Nietzsche, I really like that quote, although I think that its truthfulness may be questioned...I love the colors (and of course the way you used them in the poster.) I also really liked the way you curved the word "interpretations" around the rest of the quote. Again really only one small detail I think that it might be better if you had changed; which would be that I think that maybe there should have been a bit more space between "facts" and "only".
I really like your first quote, and the way you set it up, it make the word brother really stand out the only thing i can say is that maybe you could have left out the , since the words are stacked one top of each other.
For the second poster I like how you have the font changing size throughout the poster, it makes it fun and more interesting.
The Third poster I like how you made the word interpretations curve around the other words, and the blue background. Again you probably don't need the , unless its in the middle of a sentence and then end makes ( where is sticks out) it kinda distracting
The colors/font/texture were nice and "war-like". The mood is set, and that is really important I believe when it comes to typography. You seemed to nail the mood! I like how "brothers" is off to the side, and big; I think that by maybe staggering the letters or something it would offer the poster more balance.
"Fist and Knife" You're use of font size was excellent here! Though I liked what you did, one suggestion I would make is to change the style to something a bit more edgy, because it looks kinda happy for the quote! :p
"Nietzsche"-
Simple with a twist. Like how you have "interpretations" in a semicircle in order to show your own interpretation. I would bring everything down a little so there isn't so much blank space at the bottom, and also make sure the i and s in "interpretations" line up.
I think the colors you used in the first one went perfectly with the quote you used and the way you typed out brotherswas really nice.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the colors in the second poster and I think the way you made to and a look was really interesting.
I think out of them all the last is my favorite. I really like the quote and I like the way you curved the word interpretations.
The second one the font lifts the quote perfect. Same with the colors too good JOB.
ReplyDeletei like the positioning of words in the first one because it adds a lot to the meaning brought the focus out more
ReplyDeletelove the contrast of colors in the second one, and the different sizes of words made it more interesting
the last one is good because the quote is so interesting and i liked how you curved "interpretations" to give it some extra boldness/meaning
The third one is funny because if you think about it that is true.
ReplyDeleteI like how out of all three of your quotes, I'd only heard one before. So that's cool that you don't just like the same quotes as everyone else. I think that the second one is my favorite, because the quote is so true, I like the colors, and the font and size of the font you used give emphasis to the right words.
ReplyDelete1 - the colors blend together. if you were going to draw attention to a certain word, i would put it in white. so if you were going to draw the attention to "Brothers" then yeah... white colored font.
ReplyDelete2 - the zig-zag pattern is cool. maybe you could make the words "Fists" and "Knife" a different color...
3 - i like the way the word "Interpretations" curves upward. some variations of different colors, or font styles, would've made the poster a little better
1st poster:
ReplyDeletei really liked the quote and the font, but i think that it's all too dark. the dark letters against a dark background. it makes it harder to read.
2nd poster:
i think the colors in this poster are really cool. i also like that the words are all different sizes and that they're not all aligned. nothing bad to say about this one.
3rd poster:
again, i really like the colors. i think it's cool that you actually put on there the name of the person who said that. i think i would have made the background a brighter purple. this one, too, seems a little dark.
For the first one: "All wars are civil wars..." I really, really like the thought, and I also really like the way you expressed it. I liked how you did most of the quote all in one size in like a column, and then did "brothers" in a larger size and on a a diagonal path. I think that really had a great impact on the effect of the quote. I can't really think of any way to improve it except maybe having only 3 dots instead of 5, (after "all men are").
ReplyDeleteFor the second one: "Don't bring fists to a knife fight," The first thing I thought of after seeing it was, "Well, if you don't then what do you intend to hold your knife with?" but anyway that is off subject. I thought that the yellow on purple coloring really looked good and I also liked the different sizes of the lines, ("knife" being just a little bigger than everything else, "don't" and "fists" following at just a little smaller, and "bring", "to", and "a" being comparatively rather small.) I think that emphasizing the keywords like that really had a great positive impact on the overall effect of the quote. The only recommendation I have for you on that one is that it's possible that certain other colors might go better with the quote and its message.
Finally, for you third quote: "There are no facts..."-Nietzsche, I really like that quote, although I think that its truthfulness may be questioned...I love the colors (and of course the way you used them in the poster.) I also really liked the way you curved the word "interpretations" around the rest of the quote. Again really only one small detail I think that it might be better if you had changed; which would be that I think that maybe there should have been a bit more space between "facts" and "only".
I really like your first quote, and the way you set it up, it make the word brother really stand out the only thing i can say is that maybe you could have left out the , since the words are stacked one top of each other.
ReplyDeleteFor the second poster I like how you have the font changing size throughout the poster, it makes it fun and more interesting.
The Third poster I like how you made the word interpretations curve around the other words, and the blue background. Again you probably don't need the , unless its in the middle of a sentence and then end makes ( where is sticks out) it kinda distracting
"Brothers"
ReplyDeleteThe colors/font/texture were nice and "war-like". The mood is set, and that is really important I believe when it comes to typography. You seemed to nail the mood! I like how "brothers" is off to the side, and big; I think that by maybe staggering the letters or something it would offer the poster more balance.
"Fist and Knife"
You're use of font size was excellent here! Though I liked what you did, one suggestion I would make is to change the style to something a bit more edgy, because it looks kinda happy for the quote! :p
"Nietzsche"-
Simple with a twist. Like how you have "interpretations" in a semicircle in order to show your own interpretation. I would bring everything down a little so there isn't so much blank space at the bottom, and also make sure the i and s in "interpretations" line up.
1. this ones nice but it's kind of boring....
ReplyDelete2. i really like the colors on this one!
3. i like the way you curved the words. i can't really think of anything critical to say about this one!